Once we had made our fish we wrote about them. First we described the decoration.
Fluffy feathers.
Spiral shell.
Then we described the colour of our fish.
White spotty, orange fish.
Orange stripy, black fish.
The we activated the noun (fish) to tell the reader what the fish is doing...
Dancing through the coral reef.
Dashing through the water.
Ready for sharing our fish in school assembly we put our poems into Puppet Pals on the ipads. Its easy to take a photo and then turn that photo into a puppet. The puppets can be moved around and made bigger and smaller as our fish descriptive writing is read.
We hope you enjoy our work.
Awesome fish descriptions, love the videos!! Alison O'Halloran :0)
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